Edited Script (formative)

As a group you will have decided on a theme to emphasize. That theme will be reflected in the cuts that you make in your scene. 

You can cut whatever you feel is fit -- including characters -- as long as you can tell me why you decided to cut it. Why wasn't this important to your group?

If you can justify any cut it is a 4.

If you can justify most cuts it is a 3.

If you can justify some cuts it is a 2.

If you cannot justify any cuts it is a 1.

Your edited script of your scene is due Friday, November 8th.